Supernatural Poetry posted January 29, 2016


Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
You think they would at least oil them

They Had A Squeak In Them

by krys123

Being alone didn't worry him
 but being here did.
 Something about this place
 that caused his nerves to rattle
 and his breathing to become heavy.
 It was like waiting in a long line
 that was moving so slow,
  like standing in a police line up,
 not that he ever did.
The voices he heard
 came from all directions
 and they were even growing above him.
he felt frightened at first
 when it came his time
 he realized that this was it.
 Like he felt like he was going to be sentenced;
 and he was.
 One at a time, in front of him,
 there were people with elation
 and others screaming.
 Some crying and howling
for another chance to be appraised
by this all holy adjudicator.
 But this person's answer was stern,
and for some the outcome was dire.
 He was next, he felt the goosebumps
 on his skin seem to vibrate
  and bubble up like raindrops on water,
 in a tingling way.
 It was strange as he did hear things
 inside of his head
 and not from his ears,
 a pounding voice,
 as the conciliator
 told him it was all right to go.
He felt joyous elation
that he had never felt before,
 and then he laughed, as it seemed
 he heard the gates
 had a squeak in them.



Free Verse Poetry writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a free verse poem. Free verse is a form of poetry that does not necessarily follow to any specific meter patterns, rhyme, or any other pattern. Free verse, despite its freedom, often still has some elements of form. Most free verse does observe a convention of lines and structure. No rhyming patterns.

Recognized


picture of the pearlygates.bandcamp.com
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


Save to Bookcase Promote This Share or Bookmark
Print It View Reviews

You need to login or register to write reviews. It's quick! We only ask four questions to new members.


© Copyright 2017. krys123 All rights reserved.
krys123 has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.