Mystery and Crime Flash Fiction posted August 18, 2015


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The Comeback

by michaelcahill

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"911."
 
"Officer down! Officer Down! We need a damn bus".

 
Cops converged on the Presidential suite of the Bonaventure Hotel, downtown Los Angeles. Helicopters hovered and dipped outside the shade-drawn windows. Swat teams and daredevils rappelled the hotel face seeking a vantage point.
 
Sergeant Tannenbaum slid the card, popping the door. At the table in front of a crackling fake fire sat a figure in a white hoodie. A lobster dinner complete with Dom Perignon sat on the table.
 
"Where's the officer? A call came from this room … Sarge, this makes no …."
 
"Oh boy, smell that?"
Tannenbaum's nose crinkled. Drawn by the odor he leaned forward. "Vinegar? What in the world?"
 
A loud bang sounded. Tannenbaum reeled backwards clutching his chest.
 
The figure pulled back his hoodie and displayed a beeping electronic device. "Freeze, this whole place is wired to blow."
 
Rookie officer, Shaq O'Neal gasped. "Holy crap! It's Elvis".
 
 
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Writing Prompt
Write a story in no more than 150 words using boy, fire, vinegar, hoodie, and world.

Story can be about any topic you want to write about as long as it uses all five words.

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