Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted June 27, 2015 |
Breathe. Can't.
haiku (man-made toxic clouds)
by Sis Cat
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I challenged myself to rewrite a haiku I wrote forty-one years ago. Retaining my idea of a smog-obscured moon, I expanded to comment on the toxic smog that chokes babies in their cribs in Beijing today.
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