| Horror and Thriller Fiction posted June 24, 2015 |
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Sometimes you just know that things are very wrong
Very Wrong
by LoannaLois
During the storm, she begged me to stay with her troubled son. His dad would later come for him.
Their power went out, then my phone died. I became anxious. Something was very wrong.
Without warning he attacked. Laughing in the stormy darkness, his hands, his teeth were relentless. I was no match for abject insanity.
Finally, his dad stormed in, finding me bloodied and bruised. Totally shocked, he ran after Steven.
Minutes dragged until I had had enough.
Leaving, I entered the hallway. Waiting for me, Steven was still holding the knife he had used to kill his dad.
Tiny Tales of Terror Contest contest entry
During the storm, she begged me to stay with her troubled son. His dad would later come for him.
Their power went out, then my phone died. I became anxious. Something was very wrong.
Without warning he attacked. Laughing in the stormy darkness, his hands, his teeth were relentless. I was no match for abject insanity.
Finally, his dad stormed in, finding me bloodied and bruised. Totally shocked, he ran after Steven.
Minutes dragged until I had had enough.
Leaving, I entered the hallway. Waiting for me, Steven was still holding the knife he had used to kill his dad.
Their power went out, then my phone died. I became anxious. Something was very wrong.
Without warning he attacked. Laughing in the stormy darkness, his hands, his teeth were relentless. I was no match for abject insanity.
Finally, his dad stormed in, finding me bloodied and bruised. Totally shocked, he ran after Steven.
Minutes dragged until I had had enough.
Leaving, I entered the hallway. Waiting for me, Steven was still holding the knife he had used to kill his dad.
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This was challenging and demanded rewrite, rewrite, rewrite...I love the aspect of word value. Thanks for the contest! Staying with 100 words was an exercise in choice!
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