General Fiction posted May 24, 2015


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Held

by giraffmang

The smell of his breath makes my stomach churn. The stench of cigarette smoke and stale beer assaults me.

My head is clenched in his iron-like grasp, fingers digging into my temples. The longing and desire are blatant in his cold, flint-grey eyes. My hands search for his, but I am powerless in his hold.

"I've wanted this for the longest time," he stammers, in a deep, guttural voice.

I feel him pressing against me. I wonder if he can see the revulsion in my eyes.

His lips touch mine, and I scream into the night.

It goes unheard.





100 Word Dash writing prompt entry
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Topic: A first kiss between strangers.

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