Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted April 22, 2015


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A tanka

A Struggling Soul

by boxergirl

Dead weight Dreariness
drooping down from darkened skies
 like smothering shrouds
leaving the heavy-hearted 
laboring for one last breath



Tanka Poetry Contest contest entry

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