General Poetry posted April 20, 2015


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A free verse

Tree in blossom

by robina1978

The warmer weather made the tree
in front of our house bloom very early.
Say: blazing blossoms,
because I am atopic I can't stand
the thing, coughed my head off.

Did you perhaps find a head?
Please return to me
or my poetry will get worse.
I know nobody wants this for anybody.

Poetry should be sweet,
beautiful and fluent,
like a lovely dessert.



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