Spiritual Poetry posted April 19, 2015


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A religious Acrostic.

Jesus died on the cross.

by robina1978

Jesus took upon him
Every sin we did
So inconsiderate by all of
Us, so sad I think
So it concerns you and me

Death is never nice
In Jesus' case it was horrible at the
End. We are responsible for his
Dying in pain at the cross

On normal days we do
Not always pray for him

The time we do think
Has to be in church, but not
Each person visits church

Church loses its grip
Rare but true
On the cross only
Sits Jesus, carrying our sins
So many of them


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