General Poetry posted March 29, 2015


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The Liberty Crack

by victortouche

Liberty's cracked.

The bell rings, but lacks
the vastness of our past,
and a vibrant flag a wavin'.

A shuffle of feet
upon the largest fleet...
yes, we're still so very neat.

But China's comin'
with the dollar's fate.

We're about the past mate,
and the people...ain't.

Give me the Vets,
and I still say...
we could change the world.




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