Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted November 21, 2014


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Made Or Broken

Promises

by Ronni

Promise is a delicate
ominous declaration

It is truthfully made
to be kept
not merely wished
only to evade

if deceived

BREAKS

to whomever made
and destroys
whatever
was believed

Which hurts more
promising without
truth in heart
or evading the trust
you lack in yourself
to give or keep?









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