Supernatural Non-Fiction posted November 1, 2014 |
A poem about suffering
Are you there God
by Jackarrie
How can God be for this suffering?
I must admit I find it quite puzzling
Recruiting help from Noah for his assistance
To drown everyone including the infants
The violent way animals were sacrificed
Spilling blood was the requirement God specified
This barbaric bloodshed ordered, was it really necessary
Should have been a kinder way from the divine visionary
"Slain your own friends, neighbors, sons and brothers"
The rich Levites had greed, so they were slaughtered
And after this deed was successfully completed
Acknowledgement from you God was happily greeted
Oh God, how could you condone such genocide
Killing the evil, yet the blameless were sacrificed
Being all powerful, you could have predisposed all humanity
To be less evil, caring and compassionate, not this cruel insanity
Silence is not helping us mortals to grow
Are you listening anymore to help us to know?
Because evil still permeates, nothing is reconciled
Child abuse, rape and murder can all still be verified
Rhyming poem about suffering writing prompt entry
How can God be for this suffering?
I must admit I find it quite puzzling
Recruiting help from Noah for his assistance
To drown everyone including the infants
The violent way animals were sacrificed
Spilling blood was the requirement God specified
This barbaric bloodshed ordered, was it really necessary
Should have been a kinder way from the divine visionary
"Slain your own friends, neighbors, sons and brothers"
The rich Levites had greed, so they were slaughtered
And after this deed was successfully completed
Acknowledgement from you God was happily greeted
Oh God, how could you condone such genocide
Killing the evil, yet the blameless were sacrificed
Being all powerful, you could have predisposed all humanity
To be less evil, caring and compassionate, not this cruel insanity
Silence is not helping us mortals to grow
Are you listening anymore to help us to know?
Because evil still permeates, nothing is reconciled
Child abuse, rape and murder can all still be verified
Writing Prompt Create a poem on the subject of "Why does God allow suffering" or Why people suffer, any length and style. Pictures may be used to enhance the thoughts and emotions. |
This is a response to the prompt that I have written with honesty of my thoughts. I hope I do not offend anybody here on fanstory for this is not my intention.
Exodus 32;27-29
Then he said to them, this what the Lord tht God of Israel says:
Each man strap a sword to his side Go back and forth through the camp from one end ot the other each killing his brother and friend and neighbour The Levites did as Moses commanded, and that day abou hreee thousand of the people died. Then moses said
You have been set apart to the Lord today, for your were against your own sons and brothers,and he has blessed you this day.
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and 2 member cents. Exodus 32;27-29
Then he said to them, this what the Lord tht God of Israel says:
Each man strap a sword to his side Go back and forth through the camp from one end ot the other each killing his brother and friend and neighbour The Levites did as Moses commanded, and that day abou hreee thousand of the people died. Then moses said
You have been set apart to the Lord today, for your were against your own sons and brothers,and he has blessed you this day.
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