Family Poetry posted October 30, 2014


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sedoka poem

Love Changed

by sweetwoodjax




he softly caressed
her as he whispered gently
he cherished her with sweet words


his hands left bruises
as hatred spewed from his mouth
love diminished with each slap




Sedoka Poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a sedoka poem. A sedoka consists of two unrhymed three-line stanzas, each with a syllable count of 5 - 7 - 7.
Often these stanzas go at the same subject from different perspectives, but that is not a requirement.

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