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 Horror and Thriller Non-Fiction posted September 18, 2014 Chapters: 2 3 -4- 5 


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My sillt thoughts?

A chapter in the book "Extreme Thoughts!

Redemption, Follow, MY Command Man!

by Ricky1024



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Follows with another poem soon!
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"By Dr. Richard Edward Smrkovsky"
Slam-Poet of Laureate.
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<><><><><><><><><><><>"Redemption, Follow the Command Man!"<><><><><><><><><><>
{Poem Number One}
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Copy write Fanstory 2014~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
{Written at home by candle light while listening to 105.7 "The Hawk!}"
"Man, the amount of damage, vacuum packed, exhausted, murderous, *hypnotized, and compromised, right before my very eyes....
To this Earth...
Beast the beast {to say the least} clubbed the wife you did as I almost lost it and flipped my lid!
Burt again [my reviewing friend} I must make amends for there may be a curse or two!
For that is destiny...
But what could that be?"
...
"To succumb, we would imagine is long lost tossed away like the lettuce leaf in the heat of the day!
But with any luck and a lot of anticipation...
...
"This planet hath been redenered asunder, murdered, rapted, all dragged over the heat of the coals!
{This I'm told}.
My work though as A Latter day Saint priest ain't in the least over!
Let me clarify...
Once... Upon... A... Time...
For no good reason...
For no good rhyme...
Adam and Eve tapped the"tree of Life" the fruit spoiled, satanic...
Two humans afraid to have sex, make love, give birth{for all of their worth} Never married, no husband was he and no wife was she...
So birth of all beings heavenly Father had meaning...
When born{nee} first you must die, and again breathe...
Conception as the womb of life accommodates...
The knot is severed and after, the head, the cry, you had no choice but to survive!
And as for me, there was five then four as death forever was awaiting at Jay's door...

{Poem Number Two}
"Just Listen to the Wind!"
"Now that we are more aware and away{disposed} bottle-fed let's conquer this human-being form and learn...
Look upward!
{yes above}
We are lepers diseased and awakened from Satanic undertakings!
Redemption {mostly in my opion} to the diapered and well, fed, baby of one...
To the five year, old off to school for the very, first time...
To that teen of thirteen and their first kiss in 6th grade....
To the graduate with hope and dreams at only seventeen...
To the grown and college educated, adult away for the first time at Rutgers...
To that carrier orientated, adult woman or man...
In New York....
{Do you understand?}
To that marriage and first child...
In your twenties, thirties, forties...
Kids grown in college...
To the fifties, sixties, seventies...
Grand children...
To the eighties and nineties...
Great grandchildren...
To over 100 hundred and eventual death."
...
"No human-being wanted birth, requested birth for all of it's worse!
But, like it or not we are stuck in a skin-tight ballooned and blooded, based, bags!
Eventually to turn into old bags!
...
"like a shot of heroin in our heroine's vein 'Wonder Woman' even she has no chance for we are in a state of corruption , eruption, and interruption!
Humanic, stupidic, sparkific, little, beings!
Is it cloudy today or clear?
Do you need a kick in the REAR to get going?
Off to work...
Drag your worthless, obese,{to say THE LEAST!}
Bodies to that fun and special place of grace to sweat!
You bet!!!
You won't regret!!!
...
"I'll clarify in A,B,C's!
The 'A' comes first followed by the 'B''s birth to clearly to the 'D' destruction, death, and dismay!
To the 'W''s worth and then bact to the 'A' and it's ability!
So, A, B, C, D, and then the w amend...
To choo-choo #9 coming down the Chicago Line...
To Thomas number 1 to Percy Number 6...
Have faith!
This is for the kids now!"
...
"So, we got the adults with spidermasn, the teens with Playstation, X-Box, We, to the Atari!
Then...
"Come in..
"You now and me...
You and me and now destiny...
And with any luck before the Earth's eventual end...
Just "Listen to the Wind!"




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