Spiritual Poetry posted August 28, 2014 |
free verse faith poem
Alone, I Walk
by TAB_that's me
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Faith Poetry Contest contest entry
Recognized |
I wrote this month's ago when I was going through some rough times. The walk in the desert is only metaphorically.
okay, folks - give me your opinion. A reviewer suggested that in the midst of despair would I really say "poop" as it was in the poem. He suggested "shit" and I guess I have to agree that poop wasn't strong enough. I just don't usually use that kind of language so it was hard for me to change it. What do think?
Thanks to montana_denny for the picture.
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and 2 member cents. okay, folks - give me your opinion. A reviewer suggested that in the midst of despair would I really say "poop" as it was in the poem. He suggested "shit" and I guess I have to agree that poop wasn't strong enough. I just don't usually use that kind of language so it was hard for me to change it. What do think?
Thanks to montana_denny for the picture.
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