General Poetry posted August 23, 2014


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Neath the Gloaming

by Dean Kuch

NO HEAVEN OR HELL Contest Winner 

'Twas never my intention, dear, to drift away and leave you here.

Now, in this twilight world, dismayed, warm memories grow cold and fade.

For truth be known, your love, I'm told, 'twas never something bought nor sold,

 such tender love and thoughts conveyed loomed lovely 'neath gloams dreary day...

 

As I awakened here I saw a lamb laid out, its bloody maw

spoke soothing words to comfort me, then tossed them o'er this tranquil sea.

While wandering weary, seeking sleep, I've found 'tis not enough to keep

thy mem'ry here in peaceful rest, nor nurture it at my behest...

 

There, upon yon bright horizons — the brightest sun, my face soon wizens,

wreaks havoc on dark barren shores — still I sense silence, nothing more.

No waves which crash so thunderously, nor dainty dingy out to sea;

I waft above on clouds of gray; I need to go, you beg me... stay!

 

While darkness leaves my tired eyes, I find you near, 'tis no surprise.

As tender tears, shed just for me, fall at my bedside... silently.



Writing Prompt
Please IMAGINE (whether you're religious or not) there is no Heaven or Hell, as we think of them (blatantly good or evil), but there IS somewhere our souls go to after death.

Write a rhymed poem on this theme/experience.

No mention of Heaven, Hell, God, the Bible or the devil (or similar names).

THE ONLY AUTHOR NOTES ALLOWED ARE AS FOLLOWS (if you wish): 'This is purely a writing exercise, and I do strongly believe in God.' That's IT - nothing more or less.

Minimum 75 words
Maximum 175 words

Word count MUST be displayed in 'description' above Title - but nothing else may be included there.

ACCOMPANYING ARTWORK IS ALLOWED, BUT NOT IN THE MAIN BODY OF THE POEM.

PLAIN BLACK TYPE ON WHITE BACKGROUND - no word highlighting, italics, etc.

I know it's a difficult one, but why not stretch yourself?


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