War and History Poetry posted June 29, 2014


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Japanese prisoner of war -saved by Aussies.

Soldier Saved.

by Aussie

Soaked to the skin - rain the only sound
Hen hid from soldiers - dumping down rain
Young Japanese soldier - hoping to be found
Shivering from malaria - hunger and pain.

All his men dead - Lieutenant Hen led
Nineteen going on twenty - just a boy
Bullet in his belly - he should be dead
"Die for the Emperor of the sun" - national ploy.

Shivering inside the massive tree - he couldn't see
A voice barking orders - Hen's hope shrank
Hen lifted his arms in surrender, thinking to be free
"Bloody yellow peril, chuck him in the tank."

He couldn't understand the lingo - didn't want to die
Aussie soldiers fed him, gave him pills
Medic removed the bullet, sewed with straight eye
Hen tried to thank them - blank from his ills.

Days rolled by - Zero's lit the skies
Hen heard his own planes diving on the enemy
He would go home - mother he could tell lies
How he was wounded - belly opened like anemone.

For months the men made their way south
Hen was camp water-boy - hoping to be free
Then the war was over - cheering from every mouth
Lieutenant Hen Tak Si gazed towards the sea.





Quatrain Poetry Contest contest entry

Recognized


Contest entry: rhyming ABAB quatrains. Young Japanese prisoner spends time with Aussie soldiers in New Guinea. The honour code for the Japanese was to die for the Emperor of Japan - no matter what. Hen didn't die and he knew he would have to lie to his mother on his return home. Death was glorious to the Japanese. His mother welcomed him with loving arms and he was awarded the Star for Bravery under fire.
Yellow peril: slang for Japanese soldiers
Tank: small cage for prisoners
Lingo: language
Zero's: Very fast Japanese planes
Anemone: Japanese flower that open wide with white petals and a centre of yellow stamens.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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