General Poetry posted April 21, 2014


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Turning The Write

by Walter L. Jones


We stand beside the lover
Held back the dreams
Walked the rive
Washed away the screams
Baptized in blood of man
Watched the cross fall
Carried the wisdom
As far as I can
Flames of fire dance in scene
Come forward
Dream my son dream
No practice just a view to be
Last of the sedum
Parting of the sea
No walk to the river breaks the blood
There
Pound staff
Break the water fair
Cup in the oil
Atoned they say
In the valley
We just walk away
So I remember his path in chains
Has it been 20000 years
Man is still in pain


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