Romance Poetry posted January 26, 2014 | Chapters: | ...29 30 -31- 32... |
Modified Octogram
A chapter in the book Romance Poems
No Surprise
by Treischel
No Surprise
(Modified Octogram) When I look into her sweet eyes There's no surprise, Because that's when I realize That look's for me. Transported to a place of bliss, A loving face that needs a kiss Waiting all the time, patiently. There's no surprise! To taste those lips and hear her sighs, There's no surprise! A lasting gift, when love applies, Given freely, Responding to familiar bonds In the sweetest ways she responds, Given and offered totally, There's no surprise! There's Just Love. |
Recognized |
For Valentines Day!
You can always read it in her eyes.
I wrote two Romances today. I put the other one in the contest. Hope I chose the right one.
This poem is a modified Octogram.
The Octogram is a style of poetry invented by Fanstorian Sally Yocom (S.Yocom). It consists of two stanzas of eight lines each, with a very specific syllable count and rhyme scheme.
Syllable count is 84848884, repeat on second stanza.
Rhyme scheme:
aBabccbB ababddbB, where B represents same text repeated.
No more than 16 lines
This one is modified because I changed the rhyme scheme to:
aAabccbA aAabddbA
where A represents the repeated text.
This picture came from Yahoo Images.
Pays
one point
and 2 member cents. You can always read it in her eyes.
I wrote two Romances today. I put the other one in the contest. Hope I chose the right one.
This poem is a modified Octogram.
The Octogram is a style of poetry invented by Fanstorian Sally Yocom (S.Yocom). It consists of two stanzas of eight lines each, with a very specific syllable count and rhyme scheme.
Syllable count is 84848884, repeat on second stanza.
Rhyme scheme:
aBabccbB ababddbB, where B represents same text repeated.
No more than 16 lines
This one is modified because I changed the rhyme scheme to:
aAabccbA aAabddbA
where A represents the repeated text.
This picture came from Yahoo Images.
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