Spiritual Poetry posted January 4, 2014


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A much modified triolet

Looking Back

by Peter@Poole


One day I walked the beach we knew,
recalled our walking hand in hand,
with gulls and waders in full view.

Again, I walked the beach we knew,
and saw our life in fond review,
a life that many years had spanned.

How good to walk the beach we knew,
which of life's fabric formed a strand.




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Well, I intended to write a triolet, but it cried out for modification.
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