Satire Poetry posted August 19, 2013 Chapters:  ...12 13 -14- 15... 


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More of my Loony Toons or Loony Loos.

A chapter in the book Geoff's Book Of Poultry

Toodle Loo

by Sankey

Well, guys, I've been away for a while

But unfortunately, some just don't

Change their style.



And I guess I'll have to admit defeat!

Because some dirty old bum

Pooped all over the seat.



It seems that we won't be clean complete

Until the tardy ol' man does it out

In the street!!!




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This is another of my inspirations from conditions of men's toilets at my work place. "Toodle loo" is actually, possibly unique to Australia as a "farewelling" expression. So the title is definitely a play on words.You can take "bum" either way in Australia, the rear end. In USA the Vagrant or hobo guilty of the mess.
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