General Fiction posted December 25, 2012 |
Two women from different sides of the tracks connect at bar
Women...Oh Those Crazy Women
by Eric Corsten
The heart of the tenderloin (a seedy part of San Francisco) can be the
loneliest place on Earth at Christmas time. The streets are empty; except for
the regular junkies and prostitutes that walk around as if it were any other
day, looking for any reason to feel good about anything.
Patty's Pub, on the corner of O' Ferrell and Bush, is normally
completely empty on Christmas, but this year, at 11:00 pm...there is life. A
woman, well-to-do in her mid-fifties and a younger woman with a fur coat and
blue stilettos sit at each end of the bar staring into their glasses in silence.
At last, the young woman spoke, "So what, you didn't get that new
B.M.W. you asked for? Oh no...you poor...poor woman. I can only imagine how
you feel." The sarcastic needles are thrown with precision and get the desired
reaction. The older woman exploded, "What would you know about it? What? Tell
me, you tramp. What would you know about anything?" You could almost taste the
satisfaction in the room coming from the young woman's end of the bar. The
older woman was obviously hung-out and starched.
The young woman said,"You're right, I don't know you or your
circumstances but I do know this - you and I feel exactly the same or why else
would you be in this rat-hole, drinking until you're blind."
The rich woman replied, "I don't have to explain myself to you or any
one else for that matter. But if you must know, I try to get blind every
night. I can't stand that man...that pathetic excuse for a man, and it's been
this way for the last 20 years."
"Well, I take it back-we don't feel the same. I actually feel much
better...that I'm not you." The young woman replied with a smirk.
The older woman is getting rattled by the young woman. "You're a whore!
That's all you are and that's all you'll ever be. A Whore!.......Whore!" She
exclaimed. The young woman replies, "And what exactly does that make you?
Riddle me that. Really, let's see, you married your husband for money, you
drink obscenely and you're a disgrace to your friends and family. Right? At
least I'm honest about what I do and who I am...and free--I don't answer to
anyone."
In a low disgusted voice the woman replies, "What you're doing is
illegal, I'm glad you can justify it for yourself but you should be locked-up
right now. You're disgusting."
The young woman answered, "I know that you feel the same way about
yourself...I know it. Listen, I'm sorry, OK? I didn't mean for it to go this
far, I really was just joking with you."
In a low, chuckling voice, the older woman replied, "Well, the truest
things are said in jest. Aren't they?" You're right, I am a whore, and after
talking to you I don't feel so bad about it either." The two women start
laughing uncontrollably. Then the young girl said(while laughing), "Freedom is
my gift to you...Merry Christmas...Ho Ho Ho!" And the two women drank and
laughed into the night.
The End
Two women sit at a deserted bar contest entry
The heart of the tenderloin (a seedy part of San Francisco) can be the
loneliest place on Earth at Christmas time. The streets are empty; except for
the regular junkies and prostitutes that walk around as if it were any other
day, looking for any reason to feel good about anything.
Patty's Pub, on the corner of O' Ferrell and Bush, is normally
completely empty on Christmas, but this year, at 11:00 pm...there is life. A
woman, well-to-do in her mid-fifties and a younger woman with a fur coat and
blue stilettos sit at each end of the bar staring into their glasses in silence.
At last, the young woman spoke, "So what, you didn't get that new
B.M.W. you asked for? Oh no...you poor...poor woman. I can only imagine how
you feel." The sarcastic needles are thrown with precision and get the desired
reaction. The older woman exploded, "What would you know about it? What? Tell
me, you tramp. What would you know about anything?" You could almost taste the
satisfaction in the room coming from the young woman's end of the bar. The
older woman was obviously hung-out and starched.
The young woman said,"You're right, I don't know you or your
circumstances but I do know this - you and I feel exactly the same or why else
would you be in this rat-hole, drinking until you're blind."
The rich woman replied, "I don't have to explain myself to you or any
one else for that matter. But if you must know, I try to get blind every
night. I can't stand that man...that pathetic excuse for a man, and it's been
this way for the last 20 years."
"Well, I take it back-we don't feel the same. I actually feel much
better...that I'm not you." The young woman replied with a smirk.
The older woman is getting rattled by the young woman. "You're a whore!
That's all you are and that's all you'll ever be. A Whore!.......Whore!" She
exclaimed. The young woman replies, "And what exactly does that make you?
Riddle me that. Really, let's see, you married your husband for money, you
drink obscenely and you're a disgrace to your friends and family. Right? At
least I'm honest about what I do and who I am...and free--I don't answer to
anyone."
In a low disgusted voice the woman replies, "What you're doing is
illegal, I'm glad you can justify it for yourself but you should be locked-up
right now. You're disgusting."
The young woman answered, "I know that you feel the same way about
yourself...I know it. Listen, I'm sorry, OK? I didn't mean for it to go this
far, I really was just joking with you."
In a low, chuckling voice, the older woman replied, "Well, the truest
things are said in jest. Aren't they?" You're right, I am a whore, and after
talking to you I don't feel so bad about it either." The two women start
laughing uncontrollably. Then the young girl said(while laughing), "Freedom is
my gift to you...Merry Christmas...Ho Ho Ho!" And the two women drank and
laughed into the night.
The End
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