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Goldilocks and the Three Bears by kiwisteveh
    Acrostic Poetry Contest Winner 
 Category:  Humor Poetry
  Posted: October 22, 2012      Views: 528

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    Going for a walk one day,
O
r so she tells us anyway,
L
ittle Goldy in the wood
D
iscerned a cottage, thought it good.
I
n spite of knowing it was sin,
L
ike a thief she breezed right in.
O
atmeal porridge sat there steaming;
C
ould it be that she was dreaming?
K
ids, you know that this was wrong,
S
he supped a plateful ere too long

A
fter guzzling that fine fare
N
ext she tried a little chair,
D
estroyed it just like that. Oh Crap!

T
hought she'd like a little nap.
H
ow could she even think of sleeping?
E
scaping would be more in keeping

T
ripping up the rose-twined stairs,
H
ungrily there came three bears;
R
emarked the porridge that she'd polished,
E
yed the chair that she'd demolished.
E
ven fairy-story Bruins

B
ecome quite cross if someone ruins
E
verything they planned to eat
A
nd Baby's darling little seat.
R
egrettably the sleeping sinner
S
erved the bears for early dinner!
    


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Write an acrostic poem. Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title. See an example in the announcement.
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