General Poetry posted October 18, 2012


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A triolet

Dr. Fatima

by ameen786

What a joy to have you around
Twenty-four seven my heartbeat
Charging chi from going aground
What a joy to have you around
Each moment I cherish your sound
Playing good doctor you're my treat
What a joy to have you around
Twenty-four seven my heartbeat



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Fatima is my 20-month old granddaughter.
Triolet: Short poem of fixed form, having a rhyme scheme of ab, aa, abab, and having the first line repeated as the fourth and seventh lines, and the second line repeated as the eighth.
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