Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted October 6, 2012


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Sometimes you have to be strong.

I'm ME!

by visionary1234

You live your life in blank despair
and just don’t care,
My zest and joy
you will destroy
 
You drag me down with your black mood
and that’s just rude -
You suck me dry
So say good-bye
 
For I’ve a light all of my own
Thank God, I've grown!
I breathe, I’m free
of you – I’m ME!




Minute Poetry writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a Minute Poem. The Minute Poem is rhyming verse form consisting of 12 lines of 60 syllables written in strict iambic meter. The poem is formatted into 3 stanzas of 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables. The rhyme scheme is as follows: aabb, ccdd, eeff. See an example and more details in the announcement.

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