Satire Poetry posted May 8, 2012

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He loves me, loves me not writing prompt

Murdered Petals

by sweetwoodjax

He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not Contest Winner 
Murdered petals cover the ground
and my smile has turned into a frown.

Does my lover love me true?
Can't I get answer from you?

I wish your petals could truly speak
and give me the answer that I seek.

As I sit here in my wedding dress,
your silence is adding to my stress.

Now one more time I ask of you,
tell me if this love is true.

What do you know, you stupid flower?
I'm getting married within the hour!

Writing Prompt
Write a love poem. It can be humorous, romantic or spiritual.

He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not
Contest Winner


thank you to angelheart for the daisy petal picture. how many lovers did you turn away because the daisy said our love wasn't true?
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