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Oh, Tom... Oh, Tom, where shall we be?
With so many things to fix
and the biggest culprit is me.
For there was never a time,
when you didn't come runnin'.
I am embarrassed by the fact
I wasn't really funnin'.
You see our gracious one,
yes, all my blunders were so real;
bet this wasn't part of your deal.
For there were too many to mention,
and I bet the worst case you solved
for me... will help pay for your pension
It was the one....now let me see...
Was it the time I pasted my story
to the wrong contest, oh, no!
But I admit, occurred twice, so sorry.
However, you never minded, no not at all.
Even when thanking you, I called you John.
Then, another time, Tim or was that Jim?
But you never minded and kept going on...
I am so thankful for your ways.
So, the next time I come with my bomb,
I'll never fret our great six-shooter Tom.
For you will give me what you know,
without hesitation or anger to blow
to help us go on with the show.
Thanks for all you do, our SOS(more mine).
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Author Notes
Thank-you to our own Fanstory Administrator Tom for being the inspiration. A great big Thank-you goes out to Mr Jones for the Artwork. Their special talents do not go unnoticed!
This is a Non-Hallmark Card because of the longer length, hidden thoughts being admitted through dedication, and generic approach applicable to a specific group.
Main instructions theme: "A special card for your boss or even for Tom."
There are rhymes and near rhymes. The rhyme scheme: abac dedf gg hihj klkm nonp qq rrrs.
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