Category:  General Poetry | Posted: February 20, 2012 | Chapters:  ...5 -5- 6... 


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a triolet

A chapter in the book Quiet Times

Humbled Heart

by anabellapongasi

When humbled heart bends down in prayer,
God hears the spirit's mournful cries-
He sees and soothes grief's dark despair.
When humbled heart bends down in prayer,
He wraps the soul with loving care
And gently wipes those tear-filled eyes.
When humbled heart bends down in prayer,
God hears the spirit's mournful cries.



Triolet Poetry Contest contest entry

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prayer is read as one syllable "prayr"

A triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is ABaAabAB, capital letters representing the repeated lines and the repeated lines must be exact--word for word.


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