General Fiction posted November 18, 2011

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just practicing imagery

A Character Study

by sweetwoodjax

I kick my feet at the stormy sea and laugh with delight as it splashes me. I dance with the waves that roll on the shore and a breeze plays delicately with my hair. I walk deeper in the ocean as it calls me and relish the warmth of the water. I lick the salt from my lips and I feel free.

I float on my back and stare at the moon. I feel the pull that it has on the tides and I am mesmerized by it. A wave gently carries me back to the shore and I lie in the sand, refreshed by my communion with nature and the sea.


I like to practice prose sometimes and play with imagery. Thank you to ambayer for the inspiring picture.
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