| Self Improvement Poetry posted October 22, 2011 |
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A Sedoka about where to go and how.
Heaven or Hell.
by robina1978
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Reading the bible
is really a must and joy. Gives a ticket to Heaven. Sinning t'wards others we should never ever do, as it takes us straight to Hell. |
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Many thanks to Tekayep for the art- a Jacobs ladder takes you to heaven or hell.
A Sedoku has 5/7/7/5/7/7 syllables and the subject of the last three lines gives a different point of view. I was inspired by a fellow poet to chose this form; ticket to Heaven I picked up on TV yesterday. Minimal punctuation deliberate.
Pays
one point
and 2 member cents. A Sedoku has 5/7/7/5/7/7 syllables and the subject of the last three lines gives a different point of view. I was inspired by a fellow poet to chose this form; ticket to Heaven I picked up on TV yesterday. Minimal punctuation deliberate.
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