Family Poetry posted September 13, 2011

This work has reached the exceptional level
and everyone who has lost a child

To BigTomNY

by sweetwoodjax

Your pain leaves imprints of
words on paper and flutters
up to grip my heart. Your grief
is so palpable, I can almost
reach out and touch it.

Your voice cries out to me
and I want to hold your
hand as you weep bitter tears
of emotion. Your legacy of
loss makes me cry a tear for you.

Memories of a life cut short
encompass you and your heart
is like an open book, waiting
for someone to read what's within.


BigTomNY has shared his grief about his daughter's death in the poems he's written and garnered more fans in three days than I got in one year. His work is awesome. You need to check it out. Thank you to bertodi for picture called Grief
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Artwork by Renate-Bertodi at

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