General Poetry posted July 25, 2011


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A haiku about the fading of a storm.

Before the Dawn

by Reini

Crying sky of grey
Drops of your sadness falling
Dry your tears in light



5-7-5 Poetry contest entry


I wanted to write this poem as a contrast to light and dark. I somewhat even tried to write it as a metaphor for people. When one feels alone and upset, a light, perhaps someone special to them, comes and tries to engulf them in brightness. This reminds me much of the sun on a rainy day.
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