War and History Poetry posted February 19, 2011


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a soldier's hope

Carrier Pigeon

by victortouche

Valiant heart

dart about the skies

Avoid every aim

Buffeted by wind...explosion

Abiding no technology

Save me

fellow life

within my hands


I hold the bird

so differently now

so reverently

Life's surging vitality

imprinted upon my brow

My life beats

within its breast

My hands feel

its fragility

My hope quivers

with its homeward restlessness


I have not appreciated

the spark of life enough

But my lesson

will soon commence

Go now

Go my fellow

stout winged warrior

And save me from

my fate












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Can you imagine a soldier's feelings as he holds then lets fly his only hope for salvation in battle. I think we would all hold this pigeon with a deepening awe transmitted through our hands as they tremble with the bird.
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