Spiritual Poetry posted October 24, 2010


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a rondeau

In Troubled Times

by AlvinTEthington


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In troubled times of wars and rapes and suicides,
I seek relief from God in whom my soul abides---
As only God can comfort those who suffer now.
Pure prayer and meditation work, I know not how;
They are my certitude and, for my life, my guides.

I cry out to the Lord in whom my soul confides;
For God has stilled my mind when tides of fear collide
With faith and hope and love, while through my life I plow
                         In troubled times.

I look upon the hills and vales of grand respite.
In guidance from the Lord my psyche takes delight;
For rest within my soul the Lord my God allows.
Serenity and sustenance the Lord endows.
Eventually all events will be made right
                        In troubled times.




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A rondeau is a French form, 15 lines long, consisting of three stanzas: a quintet, a quatrain, and a sestet with a rhyme scheme as follows: aabba aabR aabbaR. Lines 9 and 15 are short - a refrain (R) consisting of a phrase taken from line one. The other lines are longer (but all of the
same metrical length).
--Shadow Poetry

The long lines are written in iambic hexameter.

I am using the alternative pronunciation of respite with the accent on the second syllable.

I am using the five syllabic pronuncation of eventually.
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