|Supernatural Poetry posted October 2, 2010|
Waiting for a better day...
Spectral shadows shift
Among gravestones of the dead
But comes a new day
Light of morning shines anew
Bidding darkened dreams, "adieu" ...
Tanka Poetry contest entry
I understand Tanka is to have a "pivot"? and a new plot? in the last two lines, I tried to do this, please let me know if this is right? Thank you for reading and to Deloralock for the use of this neat photo!Pays one point and 2 member cents.
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