General Poetry posted August 3, 2010


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A Senryu contest entry

Disappointment

by eliz100

The chosen dream lost
Crushing the weary spirit
Longing for comfort



Senryu Poetry writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a senryu. Unrhymed Japanese verse of 5/7/5 syllables. Using human emotion.

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