Song Lyrics Poetry posted July 29, 2010


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The Mellow Yellow Fellows Submarine

by closetpoetjester


My Lyrics
Sung to the tune of                                              
ACTUAL LYRICS
YELLOW SUBMARINE

On the ship where I was born                                  In the town where I was born
Lived a man who loved to please                            Lived a man who sailed to sea
And he bragged he snagged his wife                      And he told us of his life
In
the bunks of submarines                                     In the land of submarines

Charmed and trailed a wayward nun                      So we sailed on to the sun
Til she found his sea of cream                               Til we found a sea of green
Making love beneath the waves                             And we lived beneath the waves
In the fellow's submarine                                        In our yellow submarine

They made love in the fellow's submarine              We all live in a yellow submarine
A mellow submarine, yellow submarine                  Yellow submarine, yellow submarine
Lived and loved in a yellow submarine                   We all live in a yellow submarine
A mellow submarine, the fellow's submarine          Yellow submarine, yellow submarine

Girly friends are all aboard                                     And our friends are all aboard
Plenty more of them bunk next door                       Many more of them bunk next door
Horny band begins foreplay                                   And the band begins to play

He made love in the mellow submarine                  We all live in a yellow submarine
The fellow's submarine, yellow submarine             Yellow submarine, yellow submarine
She made love in the yellow submarine                 We all live in a yellow submarine
A mellow submarine, the fellow's submarine          Yellow submarine, yellow submarine

{Hard right a head Mr. Cockswain,                         {Full speed ahead Mr.Boatswain,          
Hard right a head                                                   Full speed ahead
Hard right it is Sxpt..                                               Full speed it is, Sgt.
Cut it loose now, drop your bundle                        Cut the cable, drop the cable
Ooh ah Sir, ooh ah                                                Aye, aye, sir, aye, aye
Captain cockswain!}                                              Captain, captain

As we live and love with ease                                As we live a life of ease
(And love with ease)                                              (A life of ease)
Everyone has all the love we need                       Everyone of us has all we need
(Everyone has all, the love we need)                    (Everyone of us, has all we need)
Ceiling chromed  and sea of cream                       Sky is blue and sea of green
(Ceiling chromed, sea of cream)                           (Sky is blue, sea of green)
In the fellow's submarine                                       In our yellow submarine
(In the fellow's submarine)                                     (In our yellow submarine)

Dad humped mum in the fellow's submarine         We all live in a yellow submarine
A mellow submarine, yellow submarine                 Yellow submarine, yellow submarine
Mum shagged dad in the yellow submarine           We all live in a yellow submarine
A mellow submarine, the fellow's submarine          A yellow submarine, yellow submarine
 
They conceived in the fellow's submarine             We all live in a yellow submarine
A mellow submarine, yellow submarine                 Yellow submarine, yellow submarine
I was spawned on a yellow submarine                   We all live in a yellow submarine
A mellow submarine, the fellow's submarine          A yellow submarine, yellow submarine

(C)



Write a parody of a Beatles song contest entry

Recognized



Contest called for us to carefully deface a beatles song.
Had to have ab rhyme like their songs but with the one I chose there wasn't a true ab rhyme in it anyway so I followed the line theme more instead.

References: "fellows submarine" = the submarine belonging to the men
"Sxpt" = Sexpot
"Cockswain" = should be spelt "coxswain" but I changed to run with the love theme! LOL ... the actual meaning of "coxswain" = the person who steers a ship and looks after the crew

To John, Paul, George and Ringo ... sorry to do this to your wonderful lyrics but Yellow Submarine is the only song I really know well and the other couple have already been done.

Sorry for the imagery caused! LOL

Thanks for reading ...

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