Family Flash Fiction posted September 5, 2009


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Hopefully Sue's surprise will cheer up her life.

Sue's Surprise

by Readywriter52

Sue stood in the foyer brushing off the snow. She paused when she heard Billy's cry. Between the frozen temperatures and a baby who never seemed to stop crying, her winter funk consumed her life. After she entered the dark dining room, a sudden bright light blinded her. When her eyes adjusted, she saw her parents and Fred standing around a cake. He held out a pair of tickets to Hawaii. He said, “Happy birthday, honey. We’ll leave tomorrow.”


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Write a complete story in 80 words or less.
The theme is 'Surprise.'
You may incorporate this theme into the story any way you wish, but it must somehow relate to the topic.
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