Self Improvement Poetry posted August 24, 2008


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For anyone who has contemplated self-harm

Do No Harm

by Rdfrdmom2


Likely, we've all been there.

Acting like you’re made of steel

Trying to hide the pain you feel

Pretending dying wouldn’t matter

Or angel hearts couldn’t shatter

Thinking of the loss of your smile

 

Their lack of love makes you sad

Driving you to make choices that’re bad

Giving death a major run

If your mindset isn’t undone

Before you walk that final mile

 

When self-harm is on your mind

Remember those you’ll leave behind

Cry for what you’ve lost

Think about the real cost

Your selfish act will compile

 

Then put death thoughts away

Transform all of your dismay

Into a brand new plan

Show them you really can

Living is surely worthwhile

 

             jbh

         8-24-08

        




The Words Are The Same contest entry

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The contest requires that a poem be written using at least nine of the following words: Angel; Heart; Steel; Death; Cry: Smile; Love; Shatter; Run; and Hide. As it turns out, I used all ten. This was written with someone in mind; however, my life has been touched more times than I care to admit by someone's suicide or suicide attempt. Those who were successful (seems a strange term to use when someone takes their own life, doesn't it?) have forever changed my life in ways I cannot even begin to share with you. The most recent one was in May and is still sending reverberations through our church and community. I don't cast judgement as I have been so dangerously close due to constant physical pain in the midst of some soul-shattering events and know how easy it is to slip into that bottomless black hole. I just pray that anyone even remotely considering doing this will make that phone call or reach out to someone first.
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