General Poetry posted July 20, 2008


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VisualSwan

Curvature of Grace

by Helvi2

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Swan design ~ Reading instructions in Author's Notes

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......................................E..N..T........................................................................................................
..................................C ..............U....................................................................................................
...............................C ...................A.........................................................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,...

...........................
A...@....................T
.....................................................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,...
.............................  .......
@...@..C....,,,,E
......................................................................  ...................
.....................................................U....@..........................................................................................
.....................................................R.....T..........................................................................................
..................................................V......H............................................................................................
..............................................A......E................................................................................................
.........................................C.........I...................................................................................................
.......................................E........R.....................................................................................................
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O.......,,,@.....................................................................................................
............................,...U........@.......................................................................................
.      ..        ..
.            .................
S........L.................. Y.....@.....P.....O.......................S
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........,,,,.............. .
@........O..............L.............................. S........@.....W
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...........................N............V.....E...........Exquisite..............E...........,,O................................//
..........................E........................Carriage, regal
grace.@.............B.......................................
............................C.....................Nature's heirloom..@..............  @..............................,,,,,,,,,
.............................K..................On
showcase....@...................,..,D...........................  ,,,,,,,,,,,,
  
.                              S.............,,..@@@@@.@.................... ,,,,, E............................ ....,,,,,,,,,
...............                        .@..............................................        ,R.....................................,,,,,,,,,
......
.........................................W...I...T...H...@...F.E.A.T.H.E
........................................,,,,,,,,,..
.................Pillows
of soft ruffled feathers, decorate azure waters of blue   .................
..,,,,,,,,,,,..........Accenting each lissome motion  against a bluish hue.....................   . 
.
.................Like lacy winged ballerinas pirouetting on wings of a dove........
...
...............Each has the grace of an Angel that drifted from Heaven above..
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Reading Instructions
start ...on left side of swans neck with Curvaceous reading downward.. follow around the body to tail feathers, stop

Return to left side and begin at beak ( letter A) read from left to right over the swans head and finish at ...pose

Read the swans wing inside
Drop below swan and read across the water


I wanted to try something delicate and graceful for the visual contest so I thought I'd try a swan. I wrote the poem first then worked on formating the design. I finally got it all together, but our beloved editor woildn't give me smooth edges on the background. I hope you'll take that into consideration when reviewing. Microsoft doesn't seem to cause these problems.

I hope you enjoy the view and poem
Thanks for stopping by and reading
Helvi :o)
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