General Poetry posted December 23, 2013


Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
A Pantoum

A Golden Dawn

by kiwisteveh

There shines a golden dawn. The sun is borne
on burnished rays which comfort, feed and warm
neglected souls that faced the dark forlorn,
confused and battered by the raging storm.

On burnished rays which comfort, feed and warm,
we nourish hopes and dreams. Where once we stood
confused and battered by the raging storm,
there flourishes new life that's strong and good.

We nourish hopes and dreams where once we stood
afraid and crushed by doubt. On stony ground
there flourishes new life that's strong, and good
can celebrate with joy a peace profound.

Afraid and crushed by doubt, on stony ground,
neglected souls that faced the dark forlorn,
can celebrate with joy a peace profound:
There shines a golden dawn - the Son is born.



Write a Pantoum contest entry

Recognized


Have a great Christmas!
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


Save to Bookcase Promote This Share or Bookmark
Print It View Reviews

You need to login or register to write reviews. It's quick! We only ask four questions to new members.


© Copyright 2024. kiwisteveh All rights reserved. Registered copyright with FanStory.
kiwisteveh has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.