Category:  General Flash Fiction | Posted: May 1, 2011


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The Bottom Line

by jackiesmuse

























Life on our ramshackle farm was harsh for Momma and me; my penny-pinching pa made certain of that.

My mother never asked for much; the old man’s temper was quick and ugly. She had a wish list, sure: a freshly painted house with a white picket fence running around it, a garden in the side yard...
 
“Only time I’d put money into it,” he’d say when Momma hinted around, “is if I was selling, and that’s not happening any time soon.”
 
One of the few times I dared stand up to him, he made me lug my toys outside. As I dragged them down the back stairs I got to thinking I might be getting new ones or maybe some video games...
 
I plopped GI Joe on top of the pile.
 
That’s when I saw the red can next to my old man. The bastard told me to stand back, splashed on the gas, struck a match and threw it into my treasures.
 
Whoosh!
 
He smiled.
 
I wished him dead as I watched my buddy melt in the flames.
 
The following spring, Pa'd  just come in from a long day on the back 40 when Momma made her plea for a garden. "... I could sell what I grow."
 
"Ya don't say.” He wiped the grimy sweat from his forehead with his snot rag. " You have everything you need!"
 
“I know, but...”
 
“And that kid of yours has three hots and a cot--”
 
“I’m your kid, too!” I blurted, moving in front of Momma as I eyed the ax in the corner of the kitchen.
 
“You shut your damn yap.” He swatted me aside like a gnat before I could make a move.
 
Momma stepped in front of me. “I could plant tomatoes, carrots ... and maybe some  tulips...”
 
He stood stone-still, arms folded, neck veins bulging while she spilled her guts all over the holey linoleum; I lay in a puddle of pain behind her.
 
“...roses. American Beauties. Red ones. They’d bring in a goodly sum. Increase that blessed bottom line of yours!"

"Would they now?"

"If you could just make a little plot for me in the side yard I’d--”
 
"I'll give you a damn plot." He pulled on his cap and slammed out the back door.
 
The tractor engine roared. A split-second later, the old John Deere was barreling through the side yard, dragging the disc harrow.
 
Momma ran out screaming, “Fred, no!” as she tried to stop him.
 
I grabbed the ax and flew down the steps.
 
The bastard was grinning ear-to-ear as he dug up humungous earth chunks in the side yard.
 
No, I didn’t kill him--couldn’t do it--but he did choke to death on a crappie bone three days after destroying the yard.
 
Momma died from pneumonia right after Christmas that same year, without realizing her dreams.
 
I got the farm and the cash my father had stashed under their mattress.
 
Nothing changed for damn-near fifteen years. Old habits...
 
A few months back I painted the house candy-apple red and put up a white picket fence. Mosher Landscape graded the side yard and planted a kickass garden; the farm looks like a million bucks! Momma would've loved it...except for the ‘For Sale by Owner’ sign in the front yard.
 
The place should bring a pretty penny. My wife and kid don’t want me to sell it “now that it’s what it could have been all along!”
 
Some people just don’t understand the bottom line.
 
 
 
 
 
 


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Bottom Line: The final total of an account, balance sheet, or other financial document.
Thank you Keri Harrish for the picture.
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Artwork by Keri Harrish at FanArtReview.com

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