By Jannypan (Jan)
Author Notes | I read this format was called a Whitney. I do not know if that is true, but I wanted to post this because I love rain (as long as everyone is safe). |
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Author Note: | Faith Redeems / 6 word contest entry |
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Author Note: | Easter Blessings |
Author Notes | Celebrate or not. Be safe. |
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Author Notes | Google image of "The Hand of God" taken from the Hubble telescope. |
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Author Notes | Google advanced image. The Minute Poem is a poem that follows the "8,4,4,4" syllable count structure. It usually has 3 stanzas that are exactly the same. So: 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables (Poetry Dance FanStory source). |
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God touches
black holes where light cannot escape
universal truth
Author Notes | Google image of picture taken by Hubble telescope. God is omnipresent--defined as being everywhere at all times. Black holes are a mystery to scientists. Light cannot escape from black holes--unless??? |
By Jannypan (Jan)
Author Note: | HE DIED ON THE CROSS FOR US |
Salvation awaits those who believe in their hearts.
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By Jannypan (Jan)
Author Note: | Heaven's Light / poetry potlatch 9-17-2016 |
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***portend--foreshadow, signify, mean topic of poetry potlatch--light ***terza rima--It consists of three or more tercets plus an ending couplet. (A tercet is a three-line stanza. A couplet is a two-line stanza.) Meter is iambic tetrameter (8 syllables or 4 iambic feet per line) --or-- iambic pentameter (10 syllables or 5 iambic feet per line) The rhyme pattern is aba, bcb, cdc, ded, ... xx (where x is the rhyme at the middle of the previous tercet). |
By Jannypan (Jan)
Author Note: | His Light / faith contest entry |
There's calm before dawn breaks
spreading light
as nature's palette awakens,
and shows all what it takes
for this sight.
With God, the artist, it begins
when He paints Heaven's skies.
Awesome view
unfolds for all. We see His grace
reflected in our eyes.
This is true--
believe in Him. He will embrace
for none can supersede
His power
as His light always shines--our guide
to make darkness recede.
Don't cower,
walk with Him, keep His love inside.
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Tri-fall, created by Jan Turner, consists three 6-line stanzas. The rhyme scheme is a,b,c/a,b,c/a,b,c and meter [syllable count per line] for each stanza is as follows: 6/3/8, 6/3/8, 6/3/8. ***supersede is correct & the accepted spelling--not supercede |
By Jannypan (Jan)
Author Note: | JESUS and the FIREFLY / potlatch / * notes |
When I'm around, young children flock to me at night.
Some years ago, I called a small barn home.
While resting my tired wings, I heard
the cow say, "I can see we're not alone."
The stock soon spy a baby boy in fading light
in swaddling cloths asleep. Adults surround with pride.
Soon he's awake, so I will stay awhile.
Each time my light begins to flash
the babe born Christmas night gives me a smile.
The night sky brightens--stars start merging; they will guide.
The critters stir. I flit and fly and flash with fun.
My humble light is like a toy. What joy!
So proud am I, and please believe
that I was needed. I helped this young boy.
With love and truth and light He shines and we've all won.
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***notes style--symmetrina--invented by FS writer pantygynt The topic for the Symmetrina is to write a first person Symmetrina from the POV of one of the animals in that Bethlehem stable. Any adaptation of the traditional Christmas story will do and I don't suppose the ox, ass and sheep were the only animals there, be as original as you wish, you rats and roaches. ***The symmetrina stanza is five lines long. 1. Line one, An Alexandrine Hexameter (a line of 12 syllables). The 'a' rhyme. 2. Line two, a pentameter (a line of 10 syllables or 11 sylables if it has a feminine ending.) The 'b' rhyme. 3. Line three, a tetrameter (a line of 8 syllables or nine syllables if it has a feminine ending.) The 'c' rhyme. 4. Line four, as for line two. The 'b' rhyme. [10syls.] 5. Line five, as for line one. The 'a' rhyme [12 syls.]. ~~May have as many verses as you wish.~~ |
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Author Note: | Let There Be Light |
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Author Notes | Google advanced image. This is dedicated to all soldiers everywhere who fight for our freedom. |
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This is a triolet [that fact is hidden by the background]. A triolet is a poem of only eight lines with a rhyme scheme abaaabab. The fourth and seventh lines are the same exact line as the first. The eighth line is the same exact line as the second. |
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Author Notes | Google advanced image. I am not asking for you to take in the homeless However, many of us are just a paycheck away from being like the man in the poem. Be kind. I see more and more people, mostly men, with signs asking for help because of the downturn in the oil economy in my oil town. [I intended this to be a sonnet, but I could not get the rhythm right.] |
By Jannypan (Jan)
Rejoice, the Creator
Of all things wishes to lift
You to a
Glorious life
By
Inspiring
Visions of Heaven through His love
Author Notes | Google advanced image. I thought about entering this in the acrostic contest. However, I likely would have been disqualified since Roy G Biv is a made up name for the colors of the rainbow in order. |
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Inspiration: Now faith is the substance of things hoped for the evidence of things not seen. Heb. 11:1. |
By Jannypan (Jan)
Author Note: | Wonders of God's Sky |
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appraise--used as a verb meaning to consider in a comprehensive way |
By Jannypan (Jan)
Author Note: | Let God Into Your Life / 2nd place winner |
After the Christmas rush is over, and it's here,
be thankful for what you have, that you hold dear.
Concentrate on your beliefs without fear,
determine to improve in the new year,
erase all negativity, hatred, and adhere
foremost to your spirituality as it becomes clear.
Grant God your heart and soul,
He will guide and make you whole.
Insist on His presence, allow Him to control
just as He does, but you must enroll.
Keep Him in your heart as you extol
love He has for all. He's there to console
mankind when we feel the need,
never forget, for each of us He did bleed
on the cross. Don't allow Satan to mislead,
prioritize your life and you'll succeed,
quit making excuses and proceed.
Recall His teachings and take heed.
Shower others with blessings and pray,
treat them with respect and keep evil at bay.
Unite with the Lord and don't stray.
Victory will be yours on judgment day
when the Lord lifts you up. Don't delay.
Xenophobia tries to sway--has gained a stronghold;
yet, one mustn't cower. With God, be bold.
Zero in on how to claim your place in Heaven with its streets of gold.
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***If you do not wish to review based on the topic, then please skip.
**Google image *xenophobia--fear of outsiders [their customs, religion, & other cultural attributes] The use if this word doesn't mean I condone ALL of what it means. I know there are many whose ancestors immigrated here. |
By Jannypan (Jan)
Author Note: | God's Promise--the Rainbow / contest entry |
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Author Note: | God's Work / Winner of 2nd PLACE |
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