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"Immaculate"


Chapter 1
Clubbing

By Fleedleflump

Warning: The author has noted that this contains the highest level of violence.

The music filled the air like audible napalm. Lasers fired in neon rainbows, floodlights swept across the floor, and strobes pulsed with frenetic abandon like visual klaxons. Every beat shook the basement, every fill shuddered the air, and every high note raised the hairs on the backs of necks. A riot of revellers swelled and pulsed on the dance floor, their cries of excitement blending with the all-encompassing tunes into a vibrant emulsion of chaos.

She leaned against a wall to one side of the gent's toilets, playing idly with a lock of black hair extension, attention focused on the shifting morass of humanity. It was 3am, early Saturday morning in the heart of Leicester Square. Between dancing, alcohol, excitement and sweat, the hardcore partygoers would now be in that place where emotions override the body, where fatigue sets in like an aging sloth in the back-brain. They were having the times of their lives and simultaneously leaving themselves at their most vulnerable.

He is here somewhere. It's only a matter of time.

"Yes," she said, feeling a flush tickle her cheeks. A man heading into the toilets did a double take when she spoke, his gaze lingering. She scowled until he shrugged and continued on his way.

Bonus mark?

"No. Be quiet." She twisted some hair into a tight curl and ran it between her lips. It tasted of chemicals, and the cords were too springy. It might look the part, but close inspection revealed its trickery. Next time, she would pay the extra for real hair.

Pay attention!

She sucked the hair dry and tossed it over a shoulder. "Hush. I have this." Too much distraction. She closed her eyes, feeling false lashes scrape together like a Venus Fly Trap. Darkness calmed the thoughts and she let the rhythmic thunder of trance music wash over her. Only in the centre of her black calm did she realise a bole of panic was forming in her stomach. Taking a deep breath, she smiled and hummed gently, feeling it dissipate in her spent breath. In the midst of anarchy, she was coolness personified. Such was the mind of one committed.

Moments later, she opened her eyes to the nightclub's display once more. Letting her gaze wander across the thrashing crowd, she brought to mind the features she was looking for: Brown eyes with subtle crow's feet, a blond crew cut, and the early morning remnants of a perfectly tailored suit. Within a minute, a shape caught her attention. The face bobbed in and out of view, turning so she got profile, front and back in quick succession. He was moving with enthusiasm but little skill -- a fish out of water but thoroughly soaked in booze.

Investigate!

She flicked her head to dispel the tick in one eye. "What do you think I'm doing?" Detaching from the wall, she slunk into the fray before her, flitting between beams of coloured light until the crowd shrouded her form. Black leggings, stretch top and plimsolls helped her catch attention when needed and avoid it the rest of the time. She was a cat in the night, prowling with intent, and this den of drunkenness and delight was her playground.

She let the music mould her movements, swaying and turning, jolting and jumping, migrating steadily through the throng to her intended. As he gyrated into view, there was no doubt. The suit trousers worked for him even as he danced, fitted expertly to his form. Shiny shoes glinted like precious metal, reflecting the ever-changing lights. His shirt was unbuttoned to mid chest, tie hanging loosely akimbo. He was thirty one years old, her research told her -- very young for his position -- and probably distinctly attractive, but such was not her concern.

Sliding into a space behind him, she matched his movements, letting him to lead the motion. Occasionally, she allowed a breast to graze his back or arm as he moved, and enjoyed watching the tension ripple through him each time it happened. She let warm breaths slip across the back of his neck. Before long, he couldn't resist turning, running a look from her toes to her undulating false hair.

As their gazes met, she cocked her head to indicate the quieter space she'd been lurking in. Something shone in his irises -- an inebriated mixture of excitement, abandon and raw, primal lust. She grasped his hand and threaded a route through the crown to the wall. Next to the entrance to the toilets, she twined her arms around his neck, locking wrists behind his head, and breathed out a well-practiced giggle.

Strong hands grasped at her hips, then travelled confidently to her backside. He squeezed, pulling her against him, dragging them into a tight clutch. Their noses bumped as breath intermingled and she swept her lips fleetingly against his. He was hard against her, the pressure of his erection pressing beneath her tummy. On another day, in another place, this would be a heady delight.

He bent his head and kissed eagerly at the side of her neck, grazing teeth gently across her skin, his tongue flicking against the curve on the cusp of her shoulder. She unhooked one arm to give the toilet door a good shove, then all but tripped him through the doorway. They tumbled into a room of urinals and cubicles, staggered against an unlocked door, and crashed against the toilet beyond. With a deft flick, she threw the bolt behind them as she pushed him to a sitting position and straddled his lap.

Lips finally engaged as their breaths echoed, urgent gasps in the enclosed space. His hands surrounded the small of her back, pulling her into him, grinding his hard bulge against the soft shape of her leggings. She curled her tongue into his mouth, finding his own so they danced in a sensuous rhythm.

Extending an arm out behind her, she shook it until the slender needle she kept there slid from her sleeve. A foot long and sharpened to the point of insanity, it lived alongside her forearm, blunt end formed into a flattened ball for grip. She moaned into his mouth and pulsed her lips against his, grinding their chests and laps together.

Then she whipped the needle behind his head, and slid it upwards through the back of his neck.

He stiffened like a board as the needle's point found the gap between two vertebrae, puncturing the disc and scraping through muscle into the back of his windpipe. He snorted, spattering blood across their faces as she continued to kiss him. A flat moan wheezed in his throat as the point grazed his Adam's apple on its way into his lower jaw. She slipped her tongue to one side as his was pinioned, then stapled to the roof of his mouth by the metal's passage. The needle exited to one side of his nose, distending a nostril, and finished an inch or two from his face when her balled fist met the nape of his neck.

Her tongue caressed the metal spike, sending a groin-deep tingle through her frame. He shuddered against her, convulsing as he spent his last, and she breathed in a lungful of his beer-textured air. She yanked the needle sideways, ratcheting it through his neck, and he flopped against the cistern, lifeless in her embrace. This was the place where life mattered - suspended in a soup of heady delight and deadly consequence. This was where she truly lived.

This is MY world.

This ... was her world.

Author Notes This is my NaNoWriMo novel for 2015. I'm posting chapters here as I finish drafting them - raw and first-pass. As such, all feedback is very much welcome. Thank you for reading, and I hope you enjoyed :-).

Mike


Chapter 2
Coffee

By Fleedleflump

Warning: The author has noted that this contains the highest level of language.

Anderson suppressed a cough as a fresh cloud of sweet vapour swept across his face. The air was heavy with hazy smoke and the acrid smell of long-spent nicotine, now mixed with pregnant steam and an abiding air of hopelessness. He chuckled inwardly at his own cynicism and ran a finger across the raised patch shape beneath one shirt sleeve. The folk in this room hadn't followed the modern office trend and replaced cigarettes with coffee, they'd just doubled up on vice. The same hand scooped up his mug and he slurped his lukewarm drink with average enthusiasm. Hypocrisy -- a sin to some, a way of life to others.

Despite the walls being almost entirely glass, the room was murky. A view across the tops of London structures was probably meant to instil a sense of importance but just made Anderson queasy. Planning covert operations for MI6 might sound like an important job, but really he was a strategic analyst. He weighed risks daily but they weren't risks he needed to take. Being comfortable with heights was never a job requirement until offices got tall.

He swept a gaze around the meeting table at the gaggle of important and self-important figures. His direct superior -- the public head of MI6 (slim lady in her fifties, Americano with hot milk) -- perched next to the secret one (fat guy in his sixties, large cappuccino). The American lady with a dry smirk twisting her lips and a tall macchiato had to be CIA -- by not mentioning it, she'd revealed as much. Next was a curious younger guy who'd spent the whole time looking like he was suppressing the shakes and cradling a creme brulee latte with extra cream and cinnamon dusted on top. Finally, a DCI from the Met police doing his best to define the word 'grizzled' -- right down to clutching a cup of tea he seemed unhappy with.

Of them all, Anderson felt most sorry for the fast-stream, overqualified lackey they kept sending out for the coffee order.

Not too sorry, though.

"So," he said, as much to watch the air swirl as anything else, "I think we need a fresh round of drinks." He suppressed a grin at the glare burning into him from the seat by the door.

The meeting stirred collectively. "Yes," said his boss, the public head of MI6. "That's a stellar idea. Same again?" A general nod. "Benson, would you mind? Do you need to make a list?"

Fast-streamer Benson dragged himself upright and shook his head mutely as he exited the room.

Anderson let a smile touch his lips. "So, are we any closer to getting to a point? I like introductions as much as the next man, but I'm a little mystified. There have been some murders in several different countries and that means we all need to be in the same room. Are we looking for a solution or just chasing an argument over jurisdiction?"

CIA lady scraped her chair. "Hey, I'll argue if you want but I'll kick off with a suggestion. Several of these incidents occurred on American soil. I think we should let the FBI lead. They have experience of cross-border investigations."

Large Cappuccino let out a snort but didn't follow it with words.

"I'm sure," said Anderson's MI6 boss, casting a stern glance at her secret counterpart, "we have enough domestic agencies represented here to handle things this side of the pond. Anderson?"

"Hmm?" He affected an engaged tone and scratched the top of his head to distract any glances that might catch his bored expression. "Yes?"

"Do you have a contact in MI5's flexible resource team? This feels like a five and a half remit."

He nodded, letting out a silent sigh. "I can set up a team, as long as I know what I'm getting into." He indicated Creme Brulee Latte's gently quivering form. "Is this guy an informant or a field tap?"

"He's mine," growled the cop. "That's all you need to know, and no poncy MI wankers are gonna put him at risk. You need his input, you come through me."

Anderson chuckled, holding up his hands in mock surrender. "No argument here, mate. If I set up a team, I'll plumb you in. Can we hear from him, then -- I assume he has some special insight?"

Cuppa Tea nodded. "We were already investigating the hangings in Kensington when John Smith here came in to report on the nightclub stabbing. In the house in Kensington, the bodies of two military contractor CEOs were found hanged in the stairwell with rope made of twined animal tendons. It was only yesterday, we found out they were already dead when they were strung up. That's where John Smith comes in."

"I found the man in the nightclub upended in a toilet," said Creme Brulee, tapping his cup repeatedly on the table. He was clearly on something -- or coming down from it -- but Anderson knew a deep cover operative when he saw one. It was a world best inhabited by the damaged and vulnerable. There was no point in judging the guy.

"I'm guessing from the thread of this conversation he didn't drown in the golden pond."

A smile. "No, the piss didn't get him." He sniffed. "Someone shoved something sharp and thin through his head -- in the spine and out the face."

There was a stir around the table but it was muffled for Anderson. A lead balloon was inflating in his chest and sinking into his stomach. He forced himself to listen to Cuppa Tea's response.

"The Kensington bodies had a similar thing -- a puncture wound on the back of the neck, deep enough to sever the spinal cord."

"Fuck!" The word burst from Anderson's mouth before he could stop it. His head filled with clouds of numbness and flowers bloomed in his vision. As all heads turned to face him, a small bit of sanity made him reach behind himself. "Sorry -- back twinge. Been getting them lately." He made a show of straightening and pressing his hand into the small of his back. They were all still looking so he glanced at the undercover guy. "How come you were the one that found him?"

Creme Brulee blinked and glanced at Cuppa Tea, who nodded his consent. "I was following him. He headed up security for some proper shady characters in the fashionable drug scene. His crew's been taking over all the posher party venues, and they're brutal as shite."

"Tell them about his background," grumbled Cuppa. "We didn't find shit in the official databases but what do we know, right?"

"Took me some time to find out." He grasped at one finger with the opposite hand, pulling in a way that looked painful, but seemed unaware he was doing it. "Speak to the right fixers in the right shadows, you can dig up anything. Turns out, he was SBS -- one of the best and brightest. Words is, he done some proper nasty business back in the day. Dishonourably discharged after his team fluffed a mission and let the SAS take the blame."

Anderson's boss slurped her drink. "He doesn't sound like he'd be easy to overpower."

"He was pissed as a fart," snorted Cuppa, "and his face was covered in saliva, not to mention what we found in his pants. Someone got him good and distracted. Randy bastard probably never knew what hit him."

It was taking some effort, but Anderson thought he had himself under control. The others turned back to him and he realised he'd unintentionally taken control of the meeting. "And the American victims -- what's that about?"

"The spike info from the Met's cases flagged an alert in Interpol's live threats database," said Tall Macchiato. "Interpol called the FBI, who updated their database." She took a leisurely pull on her vape stick and Anderson inwardly admired her sense of drama. "Some tedious computer stuff happened and I got a call along with some heavy email attachments."

She dug in her briefcase and threw a pack of photographs into the middle of the table. "If you like dead bodies, here's an exhibition. Two Navy Seals, a Texas Ranger and a candidate for Governor of Illinois. In Europe, Dutch police found another man but couldn't identify him. Neither could Interpol, so they asked us but if he's one of ours, someone's keeping it very quiet."

"He's one of somebody's," rumbled Large Cappuccino, "and that's all I'll say on the matter."

"Look into the histories we know about," continued the American after a brief silence, "and there's a clear military connection between victims -- along with, you know, the hole in the neck thing."

"Okay." Anderson nodded, quelling the sick feeling in his stomach. "Leave this with me. Let me have all your contact details and I'll rope in MI5."

"Anderson," said his boss, her eyes deadly serious. "Do this by the book, but under the radar." Her expression was shrewd and he wondered if she could see past his professional exterior, into the roiling turmoil below. She dropped her voice to a murmur as the rest of the delegates talked amongst themselves. "This has the smell of something secret and I don't like it. Come to me if you find anything dodgy, and me alone." She raised her eyebrows as if to confirm how serious she was being and he nodded to show he understood.

At that moment, Benson crashed through the door with too many drinks balanced in his hands. Anderson took the opportunity to escape, grabbing his coffee of choice on the way out.

As he headed for the lifts, images rattled through his mind like visual bullets. Needles, survivalist training, bodies and violence. Mistakes, failure and death. There was a killer on the loose with a bone to pick -- a killer with a deadly skillset and a fixation on a very specific group of military personnel. A killer with a grudge.

And John Anderson, Head of Covert Operations for MI6, knew who she was.

He boarded a lift and let himself sag when the doors closed and ensconced him in lonely isolation. He look a slurp of his drink and couldn't stop a laugh from escaping his lips. Today, he wasn't John Anderson. Today, he was Double-Shot Pumpkin-Spiced Skinny Latte With Chocolate Sprinkles. He raised the cup in salute to an invisible foe.

"I'm coming for you, honey. And this time, I'll make sure you're actually dead."

Author Notes This is my NaNoWriMo novel for 2015. I'm posting chapters here as I finish drafting them - raw and first-pass. As such, all feedback is very much welcome. Thank you for reading, and I hope you enjoyed :-).

Mike


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