By michaelcahill
Author Notes | This would be both the last chapter of the first book and the first chapter of this book. We can't do that here, so it is the first chapter of this book. As always, suggestions and input are the saving graces of my writing life! Please feel free at all times to suggest, admonish or cajole as you see fit. I can't tell you how much difference you make!! |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes |
Life resumes. Life has changed for many, but it has returned to somewhat the same routine for the Bard. Input, critique and suggestions are always anxiously sought. Please feel free to offer anything that occurs to you. It is most appreciated.
characters: Updated for book 2 Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Death prematurely announced. Actually kidnapped and now in hiding. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Currently in prison for Mudering Harpster. He is unaware the his father is alive. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. Filed billion dollar civil suit. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Revealed to be his daughter at the end of book 1. Now the heir to the Blackwell estate. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Forced to reveal that Harpster was Ruby's father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian--Killed by Winston in the first book. "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Loyal to Harpster. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother Winston- Blackwell Senior's son. War hero turned mercenary. Kidnaped father and the Bard. Accused of conspiracy to murder his father. Warrant is out, he's at large. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes |
Looks like everybody is loose and there is a kidnapping. But, who kidnapped Angela Blackwell and why? Input and suggestions always desperately sought. Your ideas are amazingly helpful. Please feel free to offer them. Your critiques are also welcome. It all helps!
characters: Updated for book 2 Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Death prematurely announced. Actually kidnapped and now in hiding. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Currently in prison for Mudering Harpster. He is unaware the his father is alive. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. Filed billion dollar civil suit. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Revealed to be his daughter at the end of book 1. Now the heir to the Blackwell estate. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Forced to reveal that Harpster was Ruby's father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian--Killed by Winston in the first book. "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Loyal to Harpster. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother Winston- Blackwell Senior's son. War hero turned mercenary. Kidnaped father and the Bard. Accused of conspiracy to murder his father. Warrant is out, he's at large. Susan Blackwell-Johnathon Blackwell Junior's wife Angela Blackwell- Susan and Junior's daughter |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Trying to keep International intrigue out of this! Any suggestions or ideas. Love the input and help. It is most appreciated and keeps me on track more than you can imagine. Feel free to make any suggestions. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Moving along. Your input has been most helpful. Feel free to offer any and all suggestions that occur to you. I am always open to critique and any thoughts you might have. It is all considered and most appreciated. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes |
Open as always to any and all input.
characters: Updated for book 2 Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Death prematurely announced. Actually kidnapped and now in hiding. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Currently in prison for Mudering Harpster. He is unaware the his father is alive. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. Filed billion dollar civil suit. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Revealed to be his daughter at the end of book 1. Now the heir to the Blackwell estate. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Forced to reveal that Harpster was Ruby's father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian--Killed by Winston in the first book. "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Loyal to Harpster. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother Winston- Blackwell Senior's son. War hero turned mercenary. Kidnaped father and the Bard. Accused of conspiracy to murder his father. Warrant is out, he's at large. Susan Blackwell-Johnathon Blackwell Junior's wife Angela Blackwell- Susan and Junior's daughter Adam Jefferson-age 13, Angela's friend Elsa, one of Angela's kidnappers Barry, one of Susan's old boyfriends and apparently in on Angela's kidnapping Trip & Antoinette (Nettie) Two kids on the boat that Angela is being held on. Possible victims themselves. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes |
Lots of questions with no answers. People and children abducted and missing. Related? We're not sure. Any and all input sought and appreciated.
characters: Updated for book 2 Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Death prematurely announced. Actually kidnapped and now in hiding. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Currently in prison for Mudering Harpster. He is unaware the his father is alive. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. Filed billion dollar civil suit. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Revealed to be his daughter at the end of book 1. Now the heir to the Blackwell estate. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Forced to reveal that Harpster was Ruby's father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian--Killed by Winston in the first book. "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Loyal to Harpster. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother Winston- Blackwell Senior's son. War hero turned mercenary. Kidnaped father and the Bard. Accused of conspiracy to murder his father. Warrant is out, he's at large. Susan Blackwell-Johnathon Blackwell Junior's wife Angela Blackwell- Susan and Junior's daughter Adam Jefferson-age 13, Angela's friend Elsa, one of Angela's kidnappers Barry, one of Susan's old boyfriends and apparently in on Angela's kidnapping Trip & Antoinette (Nettie) Two kids on the boat that Angela is being held on. Possible victims themselves. Abigail Stevens, Lincoln's daughter--Jenkins, Jazzy and June, Lincoln's grandkids. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Clues are hard to come by. Everyone seems to end up at the mansion. Only the kidnapping of Angela gives them a reason not to be at each other's throats. Suggestions? Input? Critique? I always listen and appreciate all thoughts very much. Please feel free to offer anything! |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes |
Clues begin to come forward now as demands for ransom are made. At least they know what is wanted. Input and suggestions are always eagerly sought. Your help is so appreciated. Thank you!
characters: Updated for book 2 Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Death prematurely announced. Actually kidnapped and now in hiding. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Currently in prison for Mudering Harpster. He is unaware the his father is alive. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. Filed billion dollar civil suit. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Revealed to be his daughter at the end of book 1. Now the heir to the Blackwell estate. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Forced to reveal that Harpster was Ruby's father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian--Killed by Winston in the first book. "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Loyal to Harpster. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother Winston- Blackwell Senior's son. War hero turned mercenary. Kidnaped father and the Bard. Accused of conspiracy to murder his father. Warrant is out, he's at large. Susan Blackwell-Johnathon Blackwell Junior's wife Angela Blackwell- Susan and Junior's daughter Adam Jefferson-age 13, Angela's friend Elsa, one of Angela's kidnappers Barry, one of Susan's old boyfriends and apparently in on Angela's kidnapping Trip & Antoinette (Nettie) Two kids on the boat that Angela is being held on. Possible victims themselves. Abigail Stevens, Lincoln's daughter--Jenkins, Jazzy and June, Lincoln's grandkids. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes |
The plot is becoming clear to me. (miracle) Still open to any and all suggestions and input. I always listen to ideas and critiques. Please feel free to volunteer anything on your mind. Thank you for your support.
characters: Updated for book 2 Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Death prematurely announced. Actually kidnapped and now in hiding. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Currently in prison for Mudering Harpster. He is unaware the his father is alive. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. Filed billion dollar civil suit. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Revealed to be his daughter at the end of book 1. Now the heir to the Blackwell estate. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Forced to reveal that Harpster was Ruby's father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian--Killed by Winston in the first book. "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Loyal to Harpster. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother Winston- Blackwell Senior's son. War hero turned mercenary. Kidnaped father and the Bard. Accused of conspiracy to murder his father. Warrant is out, he's at large. Susan Blackwell-Johnathon Blackwell Junior's wife Angela Blackwell- Susan and Junior's daughter Adam Jefferson-age 13, Angela's friend Elsa, one of Angela's kidnappers Barry, one of Susan's old boyfriends and apparently in on Angela's kidnapping Trip & Antoinette (Nettie) Two kids on the boat that Angela is being held on. Possible victims themselves. Abigail Stevens, Lincoln's daughter--Jenkins, Jazzy and June, Lincoln's grandkids. Abdullah and Ysenia- Purchased Antoinette (Nettie) for their own devices from Barry and Elsa |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | The children are up for sale. Angela is held for ransom. People are placing trust where they shouldn't. Everyone is underestimating the level of danger. Great input as always. Thank you kindly. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes |
Perhaps you'd like to make some suggestions after all! Well, moving along. I shouldn't be so comforted by the fact that there is the first edit in my future, but... there is the first edit in my future. Please feel free.
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By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Getting somewhere now. Suggestions or input eagerly sought as always. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | All suggestions and input appreciated and looked forward too. Thank you so much. I always consider all input. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes |
Action moving back to dry land and bright lights, VEGAS! All input and suggestions eagerly sought and considered.
characters: Updated for book 2 Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Death prematurely announced. Actually kidnapped and now in hiding. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Currently in prison for Mudering Harpster. He is unaware the his father is alive. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. Filed billion dollar civil suit. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Revealed to be his daughter at the end of book 1. Now the heir to the Blackwell estate. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Forced to reveal that Harpster was Ruby's father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian--Killed by Winston in the first book. "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Loyal to Harpster. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother Winston- Blackwell Senior's son. War hero turned mercenary. Kidnaped father and the Bard. Accused of conspiracy to murder his father. Warrant is out, he's at large. Susan Blackwell-Johnathon Blackwell Junior's wife Angela Blackwell- Susan and Junior's daughter Adam Jefferson-age 13, Angela's friend Elsa, one of Angela's kidnappers Barry, one of Susan's old boyfriends and apparently in on Angela's kidnapping Trip & Antoinette (Nettie) Two kids on the boat that Angela is being held on. Possible victims themselves. Abigail Stevens, Lincoln's daughter--Jenkins, Jazzy and June, Lincoln's grandkids. Abdullah and Ysenia- Purchased Antoinette (Nettie) for their own devices from Barry and Elsa #Abdullah drowned in raid. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | action moves to Las Vegas. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | The action shifts to Vegas. The wherabouts of the kids and Angela is unknown. Very little to go by now. Great input and suggestions. Always open to any thoughts or ideas. Thanks for all of your help. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Everyone involved is converging on Vegas. But, not everyone knows where everyone else is. Suggestions are so appreciated and many are being taken and are working beautifully. Thank you so much. Please feel free to mention whatever occurs to you!! |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Rolling along. Appreciating all of your suggestions. Please keep them coming. I can't tell you how much they help. Thank you so much! |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Slowing down and trying to find good direction with this. Any suggestions and input appreciated. Your help has been wonderful. I feel like I'm in too big a hurry. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Moving right along. Been busy, busy. Trying to get back on track. Suggestions, critique and ideas most welcome!! |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | How do you like current events? Suggestions or input is always sought and most appreciated. Trying to get caught up with responses, so cutting back on the number of postings for the time being. Thank you for your patience! |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Things are going on at the same time everywhere! Any suggestions. Slowing down the posts to catch up on the replies and reviews. Well, trying to. Loving your input. Thank you. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Any ideas. Feel free, I am always listening and open to all ideas and input. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | I've slowed down the posting pace. Notice any difference? Or should I go back to a quicker pace? Appreciate all the suggestions and input as always!! Thank you! |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Will try to post more regularly. A chapter a day or at least five a week. Input always appreciated and seriously considered. Thank you. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes |
Trying to post as close to daily as possible. Still behind in responses. Trying to stay current and catch up with the back log. Thank you for sticking with me. Your input is always read and considered with seriousness. It saves me all the time. Thank you so much.
characters: Updated for book 2 Johnathon Blackwell Senior-Harpster, deceased former owner of a music conglomerate. Death prematurely announced. Actually kidnapped and now in hiding. Johnathon Blackwell Junior- Senior's son and heir apparent to the family fortune. Currently in prison for Mudering Harpster. He is unaware the his father is alive. Lilith Blackwell- Widow of Blackwell Senior and claimant to the estate. Filed billion dollar civil suit. The Bard-Stewart Slater, homeless, writer, musician, mentally ill. witness to the death of Harpster amongst other things. Detective Tenaya Adrian- lead is there is a murder to investigate. Detective Lucy Smaldino, Tenaya's partner Lincoln- The Blackwell family butler. Ruby Dancer- singer and Daughter of Harpster though she doesn't know anything about it. Revealed to be his daughter at the end of book 1. Now the heir to the Blackwell estate. Diamond Dancer- mother of Ruby and former mistress of Harpster. Refuses to tell Ruby anything about her father. Forced to reveal that Harpster was Ruby's father. Dr. Khin- The Blackwell personal family physcian--Killed by Winston in the first book. "Q & A"-- Q Aubrey Langstan--"Q" The Blackwell family attorney. Loyal to Harpster. Daniel- Blackwell Senior's Deaf brother. Esmeralda "Emma" Blackwell- Blackwell Seniors Mother Winston- Blackwell Senior's son. War hero turned mercenary. Kidnaped father and the Bard. Accused of conspiracy to murder his father. Warrant is out, he's at large. Susan Blackwell-Johnathon Blackwell Junior's wife Angela Blackwell- Susan and Junior's daughter Adam Jefferson-age 13, Angela's friend Elsa, one of Angela's kidnappers Barry, one of Susan's old boyfriends and apparently in on Angela's kidnapping Trip & Antoinette (Nettie) Two kids on the boat that Angela is being held on. Possible victims themselves. Abigail Stevens, Lincoln's daughter--Jenkins, Jazzy and June, Lincoln's grandkids. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Look what I figured out. Hahaha. Pictures! I'll try not to go crazy with them. Loving your great input. Any and all ideas considered. Critiques taken to heart and mulled over. Thanks for all your help. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Sorry to have lagged behind. Very busy. Thank you for all your input. Will try to keep the story going on a more regular basis. Some illness in the household. Thanks for all your help and patience. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Rambling towards an ending somewhere in the near future perhaps. Any ideas or thoughts? All input and suggestions considered. Real life has been slowing me down a bit. Will try and get caught up and back on track. Thanks for your help and patience. mikey |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Couldn't wait too long to reveal who shot who. Still lovin' the picture thing! |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes |
Sorry for the time lapse between chapters. I've been off line for about a week. Hopefully, the problem is solved.
I'm still picture crazy!! Will try to keep up and catch up with all your reviews and great input. Thanks for everything! |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Sorry this has fallen off the map. Too many disasters to list. Starting off with this short chapter to get our feet wet. I'm behind in every aspect of Fanstory, so I'll try and get to regular posting of chapters right away. I had several written but they were erased. Good times. Thanks for your patience. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Trying to get back on track and remember some of what was lost. Getting the feel back a bit!! |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Back to square one. Moving forward as I can't recall what I had written before exactly. But, I know the general direction. So, I'm heading that way! Thanks for staying with me. As always I so appreciate the input and suggestions. Thank you so much. mikey |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Moving forward. Whatever is lost is lost. I'm on a direction that feels right to me. So, here we go. Thanks for your patience. I will try to post on a regular basis now. Still a lot of catching up to do. It will take weeks I imagine maybe months. But, I'm plugging away!! |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Soon the action will get rolling inside the compound. Any suggestions? Always open to ideas, critiques or thoughts. You've been the life line that keeps me writing this. Thank you so much. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Going this direction now. Any thoughts or input. Thanks for all your help so far. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Getting a little closer to a conclusion now. Thank you so much for all your help. Am I forgetting anything? Still listening as always to any input, suggestions or critiques! |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | I admit that some of this is to amuse myself. Hahaha. Getting closer to the end! Still open to suggestions for now and for future editing. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Still some twists and turns. Finally getting some kids to freedom. Lots to edit for me coming up. What should I do with all this Bard stuff? Open to any thoughts. Thank you all for everything and for sticking with me through some crazy times!! mikey |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Finally a large number of children are delivered to safety. But several are trapped along with the Bard, Lucy and Tenaya in an abandoned silver mine. Mercenaries led by a man with 22 million reasons for them not being rescued stands in their way. Any suggestions? Your help as always is appreciated. Great input has kept me on track and afloat. Thank you so much. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Rolling along. It seems like an end may be in sight. Thanks for all your input. Lots of editing to look forward to. Remember, there are two books. So, any suggestions of any kind would be appreciated as always. This is still fun!! |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Might be on the road home! Suggestions or input? Don't forget, two books to edit upon completion. Many directions to go. Lots of ideas to ponder. Any others? Thank you all for the great input. |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Nearing the end now. I even have a vague idea how it ends. Hahaha. That could change though. Any thoughts or input. Are there loose ends I forgot about? Two books to edit now. Combine them or expand them. Make one out of the two? |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | Definately only a couple chapters away from the end now. I'd say one, but I think that brevity is for sissies. Still listening. Insane amounts of work to look forward to. Any thoughts are so very appreciated. I can't imagine what these two books would've looked like without all of your help. Thank you again! |
By michaelcahill
Author Notes | I couldn't write anymore. Hahaha. There may be things to add in edit. I have two books to edit now. A lot of work. If I've left anything untied or unfinished let me know. Any suggestions as to what to do with all of this will fall on wide open ears. Your help has kept me going. I never could've finished this without your help and I appreciate it more than you can know. I have all of the reviews copied to word, so I do read and cherish them even though I am terrible at answering them. Thank you so much. mikey |
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