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Rating of the poem Haiku (Dreams) by skye

Oatmeal wrote,
Skye,

I read the poem and your notes. Yes, you made it Your bar and you made it personal. LOL No big deal! This is very detailed written poem. Nothing too serious. Kind of fun!

I saw no SPAG and no typos. It was very clean.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

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Rating of the poem What Is a Poet? by yeltel

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I don't think "muse" and "overuse" really rhyme, but who really cares. The verse was clever and humorous. I wish you the best in your entry. JB

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Rating of the poem Fanstory's Jewels by Rdfrdmom2

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Good evening poet friend and I think you have a true winner here, it was wonderful. I loved th emessgae of both poems and they were a pleasure to read. Loyd

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Rating of the poem Misty Morning by Amicus

Rachon wrote,
Daybreaks damp debut
Every garden glistening
Wet and fresh and new

Your poem draws such a vivid picture in such short words.
I felt you done a good job. I have no complaints.
Your Friend,
Rachon

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Rating of the book chapter Chapter XII by ashkent7
Chapter 12 of the book Grim Reaping

SherryHo wrote,

You don't disapoint.
PROS:
Well written scene with discriptive visuals. Humorous exchanges.
CONS:
I looked around the elegant (d©cor) of the elevator's interior.
"Why doesn't(does) it always have to be just right with you? Hmm?"
The lift doors (opened?) once again, and I was getting used to what to expect on the other side.
SUGGESTIONS:
None.

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Ginevra de Benci by adewpearl
cinquain inspired by Leonardo da Vinci's portrait

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