Happiness
a 3-7-53 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Great use of alliteration in this 5-7-5 poem about Happiness and I like the use of the river of life flowing better when we are smiling, when we find the happiness in the little things around us. Totally agree, and wish you luck in the contest.
cheers
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Great use of alliteration in this 5-7-5 poem about Happiness and I like the use of the river of life flowing better when we are smiling, when we find the happiness in the little things around us. Totally agree, and wish you luck in the contest.
cheers
Comment Written 05-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Thank you, Valda
Comment from Mymy Khan
A simple truth, in beautiful imagery. Loved this short poem written so eloquently and with great wisdom. Good luck in this contest, all the best to you.
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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A simple truth, in beautiful imagery. Loved this short poem written so eloquently and with great wisdom. Good luck in this contest, all the best to you.
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Thank you, Mymy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Fun after the storm in this post and I am glad to hear something positive about the rain as we have a lot of it where I am, a fun post for the contest, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Fun after the storm in this post and I am glad to hear something positive about the rain as we have a lot of it where I am, a fun post for the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Thank you, Dolly
