Othello Otter
a 50-word story18 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Elwell
Who would've expected villainous behavior from an otter! Interesting to think about being trapped in the world we create in fiction. In a way, that's an absolute fact! Nice work.
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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Who would've expected villainous behavior from an otter! Interesting to think about being trapped in the world we create in fiction. In a way, that's an absolute fact! Nice work.
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Sharon
Comment from Bridge
I enjoyed your story. Very well written. I love the reference to fanstory. I wonder how I would react to being trapped forever. The artwork also suits the story. I wish you the very best in the contest.
With kind regards
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed your story. Very well written. I love the reference to fanstory. I wonder how I would react to being trapped forever. The artwork also suits the story. I wish you the very best in the contest.
With kind regards
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Bridge
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This poem is not listed in the contest choices. Why is that?
Comment from Ulla
Ah, so this is the fanstorians being trapped within their graft, not being able to escape as the key had been thrown away. That's my take on it. The best of luck. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Ah, so this is the fanstorians being trapped within their graft, not being able to escape as the key had been thrown away. That's my take on it. The best of luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Note the magic animal and missing key, as per requirement. : )
Comment from Ginda Simpson
I don't know how anyone writes a complete story in 50 words, but wow, did you rise to the challenge. This is hilarious. And it is true, we do seem to lock ourselves in when we are trying to write a good poem, or story, or a fifty word flash. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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I don't know how anyone writes a complete story in 50 words, but wow, did you rise to the challenge. This is hilarious. And it is true, we do seem to lock ourselves in when we are trying to write a good poem, or story, or a fifty word flash. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Ginda
Comment from Julie Helms
A great entry for the contest. You told a complete story with enough detail to imagine the scene, and in very few words. A wonderful twist in the last two words!
Best of luck,
Julie
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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A great entry for the contest. You told a complete story with enough detail to imagine the scene, and in very few words. A wonderful twist in the last two words!
Best of luck,
Julie
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Julie.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I like this! Such a limited word count and yet you've composed an intriguing little story locking us all up and throwing away the key. Good use of the word "storied." Original and a very worthy contender. Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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I like this! Such a limited word count and yet you've composed an intriguing little story locking us all up and throwing away the key. Good use of the word "storied." Original and a very worthy contender. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Debbie
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
No wonder I couldn't get out of my bedroom yesterday! Who has the key to this thing?! I get claustrophobia. Very nice fifty word story for the writing prompt. Good luck.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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No wonder I couldn't get out of my bedroom yesterday! Who has the key to this thing?! I get claustrophobia. Very nice fifty word story for the writing prompt. Good luck.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn
Comment from royowen
What a magical, building a mansion for all the collective mad writers that gather each day wherever they live in the world to think about things, consider, be inspired and available in this enclave of creative people. Well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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What a magical, building a mansion for all the collective mad writers that gather each day wherever they live in the world to think about things, consider, be inspired and available in this enclave of creative people. Well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Roy
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Most welcome
