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Gogyohka Poem
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while

a blaze of yellow dips behind the hill

and grains of darkness float in the air

dusk rises faithfully 

across fields of burnt amber

in the darkness of my room

He gathers me tenderly

in His warm embrace

with unspoken revere

I feel loved

 

 

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Gogyohka is a five-line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay but never rhyme. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. === source = writers digest ===source=wikipedia

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