Supernatural Poetry posted October 2, 2010 |
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Waiting for a better day...
In Dreams
by Realist101
Spectral shadows shift
Among gravestones of the dead But comes a new day Light of morning shines anew Bidding darkened dreams, "adieu" ... |
Tanka Poetry contest entry
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I understand Tanka is to have a "pivot"? and a new plot? in the last two lines, I tried to do this, please let me know if this is right? Thank you for reading and to Deloralock for the use of this neat photo!
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