Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted May 12, 2024


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Philosophy free verse poem

The Mark

by marthag1


A story?

How about a song

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One of a spirit seeking the ancient promise of belonging.

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My mind rejected as my heart yearned

trans-imposing the image of my greatest ally

onto the planes of my most feared foe.

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I battled reason

With Weapons forged in faith.

Surrounded in Silence

That swept me away

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The beat of betrayal beckoned

My feet tapped the tune 'forgive'.

Melody met mourning

screaming made me sing.

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Soothed by a lullaby of lost lyric

My anger crumbles away

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Not too long ago

I watered and watched grow:

A Boy into a Man

Monstrous in strength and cold

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All the while, I slipped away:

A Spectator

Into a Servant

Until all that remained was a Spirit offered on the altar of ego

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His iron fists

Tore body from mind; mind from soul

my broken fingers

Held on until they were forced to let go.

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A story?

Once upon a time,

I loved you

Until there was Nothing left to love

Nowhere left to go

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So I loved love itself

Calling my own arms home

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I found a Warrior in your wake

And loved the Woman once lost as your Witness

Sometimes I cry for you,Cain.

But I am Abel-

--

To forgive and let go



Emotional Support writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem about Emotional Support. This can be showing care and compassion to another person, verbal or nonverbal. It could be about an emotional support animal; an animal that provides relief to individuals through companionship. Or even object: common comfort objects include: weighted blankets; worry beads; and fidget spinners. Poetry of any length Rhymed or Free Verse, be creative.


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This is my first time posting on fan story and sharing my writing- any feedback and advice would be kindly appreciated
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